A lie in Loyalty



A bear held his heart with love so pure,
weither theyd stay together? that wasnt for sure,
For the bear had a star,
just as close to him as her,
the star taunted and teased,
until she got what she pleased,
The heart was dropped and the star was seized,
Now it wasnt long until he knew it was wrong,
But he went on anyway,
soon the star got bored and took a sword,
and cut him off on their anniversary,
Now torn apart he ran to his heart,
seeking his love so royal,
but the heart said no,
she would not care,
because he did not stay loyal.
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Submitted on March 21, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 523
Words 109
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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