a broken cicle



i put a circle around my heart
one that would never break
and because the love i got
was people being fake.

my circle never failed me.
it kept everyone out.
so when you said you loved me.
i had a lot of doubt.

but now the days have turned to months
and the months have gone by fast.
the love we shared
has made life a blast

my faith was lost but now is found
my hope was gone. but now flies high.
my love was weak, but now is pure.
my life was dark, but now is bright.
i had lost my path.
but you showed me the way.
i am who i am
because of love you give me each day.
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Submitted on August 26, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BCBC XDXD XXXXXEXE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 548
Words 124
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8

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