"to me" revised



Cocoa is just what she is to me,
an open ear to my reality dream,
she's a pick me up in a world drawn down,
drowning in the same sounds depression.

Melting in resolution syncing,
she transcends her age in my eyes of sage,
in a world of spades she is a flush heart,
a full house aces high with a pair drawn.

Kings of diamonds with hearts of wine,
can't beat four of a kind every time,
there is only one hand to beat that kind,
it is often this games five card find.

For deuces wild in our world of pain,
while she is in there when I go insane,
to break out my pain to not think to much,
for my friend she is a royal flush.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXAA BBXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 606
Words 130
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Steven Louis Chapman

Steven was adopted, his biological father was an English professor who had an affair with a student. Writing poetry is an outlet for his expression of love. A hopeless romantic in search of his soul mate. (it changes from now and then) He hopes to capture the girl of his dreams through poetry. Visit my blog at http://thedailypoetrss.blogspot.com/ for the latest up to date poems. more…

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