"Falling Flakes"



Dancing circle of light from the candle below,
Beneath the covers, I briefly rest and enjoy the winter snow.
Unable to close my eyes, blinds raised, falling flakes take my breath.
The beauty they possess mesmerizes as they plummet to their death.
Tempted to draw the shades and squelch this distraction,
Instead, my eyes grow weary as I enjoy this moment of satisfaction.

Justin McCahren
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Submitted on March 14, 2011

Modified on March 17, 2023

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Scheme AABBCC
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 381
Words 65
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6

Justin McCahren

I'm a poet, author, songwriter and aspiring novelist from Northern Virginia. My poems are an extension of my emotions and experiences. I've been published in several compilations, but have yet to share my full range with the masses...2011 begins a new chapter, I'm opening up the entire catalog and expanding the portfolio. Criticism Always Welcome.All the below poems are original works entirely composed by me. more…

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