What did he do to make me love him so much?



What did he do to make me love him so much?
Was it his eyes, his kiss, or maybe his touch?
He never promised me that he would love me forever.
I just kind of kind of assumed that we would always be together.
I felt optimistic about being his lady
and he had me so deep in love,
I even dreamt of having his baby.

He told me that he loved me for my beauty
and the fact that I am very smart.
I promised myself that I'd give him my mind, my body,
my soul and my heart.

Was it those big beautiful brown eyes?
I know that he was genuine
and would never tell me any lies.
When he touches me,
it’s as though the whole world disappears
And everything that I once feared…
I no longer fear.

He made me feel sexy
like I could conquer the world.
I took pride in our relationship
and forever will be his baby girl.
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Submitted by s.i.s on March 14, 2021

Modified by s.i.s on January 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCXC CDCD EXECXXX CXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 807
Words 182
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 7, 4

Sarah Lateesha Hamilton

I am Proud American. I am a retired Army vet who served 20yrs defending the rights for our country. I'm a loving single mother and momma's girl. I put my family 1st. I have been writing poetry since the age of 10 and writing is my passion. I love to love. We only have one life ( that we can remember) so I live my life to the fullest more…

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