Perfect weather

Sai Shubham 1996 (Jamshedpur)



Morning was breezy,
afternoon was sunny,
and then all of a sudden came an unusual storm from the opposite direction
which actually looked super scary.

Dark clouds started taking over the sky,
looked at it the birds started to fly.

Lightning and thunder raised the amplitudes,
rain water started to drizzle down lower altitudes.

Accompanying the drops were small frozen ice balls from the sky,
everyone was seeking a place to keep themselves dry.

Water rushed through drains and roads,
although some children jumping and playing on puddles were on different modes.

After a good time the sun decided to shine,
looked like the star also aged like a good fine wine.

Rays falling over the green tree leaves provided them with a fresh look,
a foodie asked some chai and pakoda from the cook.

Dusty roads and houses seemed brand new again,
it felt like god just painted over this lovely new terrain.

And to go along with all these was
a perfect blue sky,
which gave a great contrast to everything we could see through the vision of the eye.

In the end
after all these transitions nature decided to smile again,
as if someone got a new life after defeating every ounce of pain.

"Symphony of nature" or "The Alchemy of life",
the irony of this event is yours to decide....
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Submitted by SaiShubham on March 13, 2021

Modified on March 10, 2023

1:07 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXA BB AX BB CC DD EE FG XBB XFG XX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,259
Words 226
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2

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