The suns awakening call

Ruby legends 1983 (Florida)



Awaken I hear you say it twice
 awakened for me it
awakened for everyone
the sun one touch on my
 face makes me feel all tingly inside

 I should not hold your Embrace
run outside in the morning just to
feel your warmth on my face New
 Beginnings a new day a new place
and a new way

 I go beside the stream feel the
water on my hands
but more I feel the Suns big
 warm hands the
Sun is exquisite and the
Moon is jealous  because
 it brings Darkness and not light
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Submitted on March 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXX ABBAX CXXCCXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 94
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 7

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