Loving My Universe



You are the miracle of the only shining light in my life, it was the start of my universe.

Your love gave me the creation of life everywhere around me, because now I see what hurts.

I acknowledge the pain, through you that's wh systemat I gained, the black hole no longer lurks, I am now sane.

The cloudiness of my fears and grief swirled for years, you pulled it together and we transversed.

Our pulling gravity of love formed the perfect star, our solar system became biodiverse.

As the planets grew and the rings of ambition grew, it became a beauty that looked rehearsed.

All in perfect harmony, all done wordlessly, I'll let you fill in this final verse.
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Submitted on February 15, 2021

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Kenny Pariseau

Just started writing poems, after all the heartbreak in one sitting i had to endure, I now use this to remind me of the gloom and move on as a survivor more…

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