My mind is a warzone. 2011



My mind is a war-zone, metaphorical proxies threaten my sanity, rhythmic entirety challenges my reality.

Explosions of creativity blast away masses of unoriginal origins.

Chain reactions connect neurons firing faster then the pen can move. Smoke rising from thin paper, ink jet ruptured, pages torn.

Time to start all over, my mind is a war zone. Where mindless criticism eats at the soul, where compliments amount to gold. My mind is a war zone, shrinking away from the world.
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Submitted by josephcarbonell on February 14, 2021

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