dear sir over there"

savage 1997



You standing there without a whisper
I want you to come closer  
Your breath stains the windows as if you are being absorbed by the moonlight
The air was crisp and damp from the morning mist

Even in the darkest of night still rose the peace of light
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Submitted on February 11, 2021

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABX B
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 247
Words 48
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 1

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