Void, Aether, A Promise



Absence is to love as wind is to fire; it extinguishes the small and kindles the great
Roger de Bussy-Rabutin, Memoir of Roger de Rabutin

Four thousand meters above the sea, I breathe without air
I feel the same when beside me you are no more
The black, the void chokes me in the moment’s despair
And The Scarlet Fear runs inside me with a thunderous roar

My aching marooned heart bleeds from behind
Of the darkened soul that consumes me at each stride
But love is the golden aether of my troubled mind
An oxygen supply brought to this confusion tide

Without your presence, they were icy nights
Though knowing your fire ignited with my fuel
Is a mild treat, a promise of a beautiful sight

Kindless trouble, is it all in my imagination?
And is the love I feel a mere foolish incantation?

I will never know until she answers my soundless voice
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Scheme XA BCBC DEDE XXX AA X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 832
Words 156
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 3, 2, 1

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