Immortal



You make a movements on your own
Just to tell the world what you think you know
Then they think you're just bored
Nonsense come out on your words

Shout at those to the world
Tell them the inspiring words you've known
Work everything out for your own
But what you've done won't tell them wrongs

After all what you've done makes them see wrong
Your words can't change the world
Your words can only make you grow
And the world is still on it's own

Your try to change everything and brake the chain
But their bad connection was they think is their gain
You pity the world you can't blame
You wish it isn't your problem to play

You're not stopping because you want change
You realize you can make your own chain
You try to tell everything at the words you say
But that's what everyone doing at all but only a little change

Someone is using it to grow for their own
You know because their words can't define their action through all
This is too much for the world of unknown
Their actions became the same through the chores

This is a world of misery
And the answers can only find in you and me
Maybe this is a world of blind as long as it can be
We make action we didn't think if we bleed

Your works become your passion
And the love became the actions
But their worlds became your traitors
Well they don't know you that much so you still handle the tension

You have faith for a better tomorrow
And you will never stop so others will follow
The weakness become your shadow
You gave up and gain more strength tomorrow
 
Feel so immortal when being human is so unknown
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Submitted by Zoer on January 23, 2021

Modified by Zoer on January 23, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXX CAAX XCBA DDXE FDEF AXAX GGGX HXXH BBBB A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,522
Words 300
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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