Metaphor Poem



Dark clouds surround me as
I try to find a safe place.
Rain drops start to fall and
Restrict me from space.

The darker the cloud,
The more rain falls.
Drenched with water and
Stuck between the walls.

Wherever I may go,
A dark cloud follows.
Making it even harder
For me to swallow.

Anxiety starts to begin as
The walls are coming near,
Making it difficult for me
To face my fears.
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Submitted by Jen_A_Schneider on January 09, 2021

Modified by Jen_A_Schneider on June 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCB XDCD EXXE AXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 397
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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