I Want (for my mother)



I want to offer you a house of shelter and rest as a fellow pilgrim

As I would for any strange traveler  

A place to give you hope for the journey and long struggle ahead

To get you a little farther down the line

I want to offer you peace

Peace for your wounded soul and weary mind

I want to bandage you up and hug your heart

I want you to come inside and warm yourself by my fire

I see a long silver needle puncturing the torn flesh of your heart

The needle is pulling a Golden thread and slowly, steadily, mending your brokenness

I know it hurts a little but this thread will pull tight and time will soften the tissue and your heart will become healed and whole and happy and complete

I want all of this for you
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Submitted by bakerbaker1976! on January 08, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme X A X X B X C A C B X X
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 704
Words 143
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Daniel Millard

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2 Comments
  • LizaCarlson
    So touching and compassionate
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • Rachael
    "I want to offer you a house of shelter and rest as a fellow pilgrim." These challenging relationships can seem impossible to navigate, but this is the simple truth. Beautiful!
    LikeReply3 years ago

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