My Oldest Memory



My oldest memory
I’m two years old
Holding a bottle of orange Crush
And stuffing my face with hot dog in roll

A photograph from 1959
Caught in the act
That was me alright
Having a cookout snack

 I remember that bright sunny day
Sitting there on the baseball field
As I devoured that hot dog and Crush
My tummy all filled with a yummy meal

 Can’t say I remember
The guy with the camera though
Must have thought I was in a race
A little boy eating like a pro

 One bite, two bites and three
Yum yum yum
 Then a big gulp from my orange Crush
Believe it or not, better than my thumb
 
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Submitted by on December 03, 2020

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Scheme AXBX CXXX XXBX XDXD ACBC X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 607
Words 124
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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Guess you could say I'm a self taught poet. I started writing poetry as a means of dealing with the emotions of finding my Birthmother's obituary and grave site after searching for 10 years. I continued writing and over the course of the last 20 years I've become comfortable in how I write. You'll notice I tend to write a lot about nostalgia and old memories. Hey, when you round the corner of 60 years, you start thinking a lot about the past and where you've been. One of my subjects I write about is love, but I try to write of other things too. I've lived on the south shore of Massachusetts for all of my 64 years. But I love all of New England. Aside from writing poetry, I also love photography and have quite a collection of old antique cameras. Baseball, football, muscle cars and car shows are also some of my interests. Not too crazy about Winter. Spring & Summer are my favorite seasons. more…

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