on a hot summer day



On a hot summer day .
It get s really hott.
As the sun shows off its last scorch.
Before it gets to sleep and it slowly becomes descrete leaving us in total darkness
Until the birds in the pm open up the morning they sing.

What is this joyful noise in my ears that fills the voids.

Of empty waste
Oh God it's getting kinda board in this place.

Soo today I finally realized.
And opened my eyes.
That what ever I was looking for.
Had me surprised.
Soo I walk with a little attitude.
A half step in my groove.
And boy if you want .
come join correctly.
But just please just becarfull please don't step on my shoes.

Because I don't know where I be heading.
But I know where I've been.

Soo if think your rolling with me let's go come on go grabb the keys let's go come on just get in.
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Submitted by kalipdro on May 26, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

48 sec read
9

Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXA X XX BXXBXXXXX AC C
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 771
Words 156
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 1, 2, 9, 2, 1

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