The Greatest offering



Even if you placed the entire wealth of this boundless planet before him; it would still hopelessly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the wealth of invincibly benign selflessness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire power of this fathomless planet before him; it would still haplessly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the power of infallibly redolent truth; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire charisma of this limitless planet before him;
it would still lugubriously prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the charisma of inimitably majestic artistry; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire beauty of this endless planet before him; it would still morbidly prove to an infinite infinity lesser than the beauty of compassionately philanthropic simplicity; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire sensuousness of this unceasing planet before him; it would still forlornly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the sensuousness of tantalizingly fructifying time; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire fruits of this unsurpassable planet before him; they would still disdainfully prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the fruits of insuperably eclectic creativity; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire triumph of this gargantuan planet before him; it would still obnoxiously prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the triumph of sacrosanct goodness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire tranquility of this inexhaustible planet before him; it would still abashingly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the tranquility of symbiotic selflessness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire fragrance of this inscrutable planet before him; it would still vituperatively prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the fragrance of impregnable righteousness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire benevolence of this timeless planet before him; it would still baselessly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the benevolence of divine simplicity; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire honesty of this tireless planet before him; it would still ludicrously prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the honesty of unbelievably infallible straightforwardness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire virility of this immeasurable planet before him; it would still pathetically prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the virility of astoundingly mitigating evolution; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire inebriation of this royal planet before him; it would still indolently prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the inebriation of mystically unfettered enchantment; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire flamboyance of this ecstatic planet before him; it would still lividly prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the flamboyance of the Optimistically unassailable Sun; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire blood of this effulgent planet before him; it would still disastrously prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the blood of synergistically unshakable living kind; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire knowledge of this motley planet before him; it would still grotesquely prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the knowledge of Omnipotent life and death; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire breath of this unbreakable planet before
him; it would still treacherously prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the breath of everlastingly Omnipresent newness; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Even if you placed the entire heartbeats of this marvelous planet before him; it would still delinquently prove to be an infinite infinity lesser than the heartbeat of  Immortally inimitable love; that he perpetually and pricelessly possessed,

Contrarily to the above meaningless methods of appeasing him; wherein you
tried to weigh him in the spuriously sanctimonious begging bowls of your lascivious wealth; beauty; charm and tawdry power; if you wholeheartedly embraced just one of your fellow living kind in bizarre distress; pain and inexplicable misery; every single day of your destined time,

The Almighty Creator would consider it to be the most Immortally cherished offering from your side; the most symbiotically mesmerizing gift from your soul; the most selflessly indomitable contribution from every of your heartbeat; and this time it would be beautifully at par with whatever he had dreamt of or possessed.
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Nikhil Parekh

Nikhil Parekh , ( born August 27 ; 1977 ) from Ahmedabad , India - is a Love Poet and 10 time National Record holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records India , which is India's Best Book of Records , also Ranked 2nd in the World officially to Guinness Book of World Records . He is an author of - ' LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY ' , which has a Print Length of 5254 pages on the Amazon Kindle . The Poet's style of Poetry / literature is unique and has never ever been written before or experimented on the mortal planet by any mortal . Though his Poetry / literature is normal and natural . 10 Different National Records held by Parekh with the Limca Book of Records India are for - (1) Being the First Indian Poet to be published / featured in McGill English Dictionary of Rhyme which is the World's Number 1 English Rhyming Dictionary - for his poem: Come Lets Embrace our New Religion (2) Being the First Indian Poet to have won Poet of the Year Award at the Canadian Federation of Poets which is Canada's National Poetry Body endorsed by Governor General of Canada (3) Being the First Indian Poet to be published in a Commonwealth Newsletter for his poem on AIDS which is 'Aids doesn't kill. Your Attitude kills (4) Being the First Indian Poet to win an EPPIE award for best poetry e-book (5) Writing the most number of letters to and receiving the most number of replies from World Leaders and World Organizations (6) Being the First Indian Poet to be Goodwill Ambassador to the International Goodwill Treaty for World Peace - GoodwillTreaty.org (7) Being the First Indian Poet whose Poems have been made into Films at Youtube.com - The World's largest video sharing website (8) Being the 1st Indian Poet to be featured for his Poetry Book - 'Love versus Terrorism- Poems on Anti Terror, Peace' , at Wattpad.com - The World's most popular ebook community and largest website for reading books on mobile phones (9) Being the first Indian Poet whose video reciting a Poem on Nelson Mandela , has been placed at the official website of the Government of South Africa (10) Having authored LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY - which is of Print Length 5254 pages and currently has approximately 1.15 million words , financially selling in the Amazon.com Kindle Store United States at - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003Y8XLKQ . The Indian Poet has written thousands of varied poems on - God , Peace , Love , Anti Terrorism , Friendship , Life , Death , Environment, Wildlife , Mother , Father , Children , Parenthood , Humanity , Social Cause , Women empowerment , Poverty , Lovers , Brotherhood . His Books and Poems have had millions of viewers and downloads on the Internet . Parekh is an author of 47 varied Books which include - 1 God ( volume 1 to volume 4 ) , The Womb ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , Love Versus Terrorism ( Part 1 to Part 2 ) , You die; I die - Love Poems ( Part 1 to Part 16 ) , Life = Death ( volume 1 to volume 10 ), The Power of Black ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother , Hide and Seek ( part 1 to part 8 ) , Longest Poem written by Nikhil Parekh - Only as Life . These Books comprise of nearly a 7000 pages of his Poetry in their entirety . The Poet's Poetry has had the patronization of several versatile World Leaders including the Queen of England . Visit http://nikhilparekh.net ; the webpage . more…

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