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Whirlpools within Low Key Shots

Exclusive recipe for ‘BRONZE’: a dipsomaniac kookaburra + a bloodthirsty bat
+ wastelands, lagoons, and mountain ranges: 30 mg metallic luster was thus produced
(Canned for future use. Silk draperies were prepared too)

A low-angle shot: focus on her dark-moon eyes, to measure light…
(Objects around: a straight back chair, a black cat-- under the in the deep shadow of the archway,
Silver ornaments, dead insects haphazardly strewn,
Swirling, camera-dodging skirts, medieval rivers, and whispering breaths
Light source—the mighty agitator, rustled through the air

Where are your sandpapers? Polish this prickly canvas
And gloss of the second season is all unveiled now: but one of the objects in this still-life,
Has murdered the light.
In this abrupt, bottomless darkness,
Her hand, which raised you from the ground,
was captured by the wide-awake lens too (you haven’t even laid eyes on that snapshot ever)

GREGORIAN equals ‘rosy fingers’ plus ‘withering flowers’
LACRIMOSA equals ‘pale fingers’ plus ‘thriving flowers’
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Submitted by catherineink on May 31, 2016

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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,036
Words 157
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 6, 2

Xiaoyuan Yin

Chief protagonist of encyclopedic poetry writing in China, advocate of hermaphroditical characteristics in poetic creation. Epic Poet, author of 18 long narrative poems (up to 70 thousand lines) and 12 other series (physics, chemistry, biology, geography, geology, psychology, calligraphy, photography, musicology, geometry, atmospheric science, and information sciences) . Member of Translators Association of China and the Poetry Institute of China. Winner of the Best International Translator for 2008 of IPTRC, andthe Prize for Distinguished Translator in the 4th World Poetry Prizes Sponsored by Dr. Choi Laisheung. Editor of several official poetry magazines. Over two thousand poetic works have been published in Ottawa Weekend, North American Maple (Canada) , Aust Cai Hong Ying(Australian) , New World Poetry (U.S.A.) , Tong Hua Daily News(Tailand) , China Daily, Global Times, and various magazines in China. more…

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