Jim's Whip



Yes, there it hangs upon the wall
 And never gives a sound,
The hand that trimmed its greenhide fall
 Is hidden underground,
There, in that patch of sallee shade,
 Beneath that grassy mound.

I never take it from the wall,
 That whip belonged to him,
The man I singled from them all,
 He was my husband, Jim;
I see him now, so straight and tall,
 So long and lithe of limb.

That whip was with him night and day
 When he was on the track;
I've often heard him laugh, and say
 That when they heard its crack,
After the breaking of the drought,
 The cattle all came back.

And all the time that Jim was here,
 A-working on the run,
I'd hear that whip ring sharp and clear
 Just about the set of sun,
To let me know that he was near
 And that his work was done.

I was away that afternoon,
 Penning the calves, when, a bang!
I heard his whip, 'twas rather soon -
 A thousand echoes rang
And died away among the hills,
 As towards the hut I sprang.

I made the tea and waited, but,
 Seized by a sudden whim,
I went and sat outside the hut
 And watched the light grow dim -
I waited there till after dark,
 But not a sign of Jim.

The evening air was damp with dew,
 Just as the clock struck ten
His horse came riderless - I knew
 What was the matter then.
Why should the Lord have singled out
 My Jim from other men?

I took the horse and found him, where
 He lay beneath the sky,
With blood all clotted on his hair;
 I felt too dazed to cry -
I held him to me as I prayed
 To God that I might die.

But sometimes now I seem to hear -
 Just when the air grows chill -
A single whip-crack, sharp and clear;
 Re-echo from the hill,
That's Jim, to let me know he's near
 And thinking of me still.

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABCB ADADAD EFEFGF HIJIJI KLKLXL MDMDXD NONOGO PQPQCQ HRJRJR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,640
Words 340
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6

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