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Keep Up Your Promise

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)

Take my arm
and keep up your promise!
They call you the refugeless refuge,
they call you redeemer of outcasts.
Caught in a riptide
in the sea of becoming,
without your support I'm a shipwreck!
You reveal yourself age after age
and free the beggar
from her affliction.

Dark One, Mira is clutching your feet,
at stake is your honor!   

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXAXXXBX AB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 340
Words 62
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 2
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