To My Mother Who Care.



I admire how my mother care
The affectionate word she do share
My sorrows and stress which she bear
Though sometimes I make her,tear.

When on days I'm on the sick bed
She with compassion,my mouth had fed
With food and medicine prepared
To make me good and ease my head.

To my mother who truly care.
Who listened to my pains and fear
Who never see me to be mere
For these i say you are the best.

An appraisal of my mother who do care.

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An appraisal of my mother who cared for me

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Written on February 18, 2025

Submitted by Akinpet23 on February 18, 2025

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Scheme AAAA BBXB ACCX A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 96
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1

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6 Comments
  • miraculousthemodel
    Thank you for sharing..
    I Love you Mom
    LikeReply10 days ago
  • mark.e.s
    Very sweet heartfelt sentiment. I love your poem, I know how you felt when you wrote that.
    LikeReply24 days ago
    • Akinpet23
      wow! That's amazing.
      I love what you write about this poem.

      Keep Inking.
      LikeReply 124 days ago
  • scott.raymond1991
    I really love this! Truly, I was choked up a bit by the second stanza, all of those times mother made soup, brought the warm washcloth and tucked me in. Every good mother a nurse.
    LikeReply26 days ago
    • Akinpet23
      that's an amazing act from your mom.

      I'm happy you found the goodness in my poem.
      Thanks for reading through
      LikeReply26 days ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    This is so sweet and heartfelt,really captures the unconditional love and care a mother gives. I love the line ‘she with compassion, my mouth had fed’,it’s tender and personal. You can feel the appreciation in every word. A beautiful tribute to your mother who clearly means so much to you. 
    LikeReply26 days ago
    • Akinpet23
      Thanks very much for this.

      I admire my mother and I hope you do too
      LikeReply 126 days ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      You're welcome and yes,my mother is my world.
      LikeReply26 days ago
    • Akinpet23
      That's aj amazing response.I love you for loving your mother to have even said that she is your world .

      Keep the love growing.
      LikeReply 125 days ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Wonderful tribute to your mother.
    LikeReply26 days ago
    • Akinpet23
      thank you very much sir.
      LikeReply26 days ago
  • Txash1
    Very good
    LikeReply26 days ago

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