A Valley of Streams



A Valley of Streams
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        A stream proceeded;
     its latter courses preconceived;
       finished of root cause.

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Written on February 17, 2025

Submitted by mark.e.s on February 17, 2025

Modified by mark.e.s on February 17, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 123
Words 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3

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9 Comments
  • Byfaithjaynak
    A beautiful picture for a beautiful piece
    LikeReply 13 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      I think I have more to this poem, but I'll have to locate it.
      LikeReply 13 days ago
    • Byfaithjaynak
      I am looking forward to hearing the rest.
      LikeReply 13 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      It may be a bunch of loose notes, or a string of haikus, I can't recall; I had said under Susan's comment, more or less, that the illustration wrapped up what I wanted to say as briefly as I could, but if I can find more for the poem, to include here, I'll post it or a new poem altogether and leave this one as is. 
      LikeReply3 days ago
  • ladyygracious
    I love the Image
    LikeReply 118 days ago
  • lisacampbell29
    Nice!
    LikeReply 123 days ago
  • Merlenecandi
    Beautifully written
    LikeReply 124 days ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    Such a calm, thoughtful flow.
    LikeReply 124 days ago
  • mark.e.s
    Sometimes the fewer the words, the more that is said! Also, a picture is worth... etc.
    LikeReply27 days ago
  • sharona.reeves81
    the brevity leaves vast interpretations - thought provoking
    LikeReply 127 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Is predestination the ‘root cause’ explanation for all phenomena?
    LikeReply 229 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      I was aiming at a specific outcome.
      LikeReply29 days ago
  • susan.brumel
    Interesting. I think I understand it. ;-)
    LikeReply 129 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      I used prompts initially in the poem to get AIDA to produce dramatic imagery that I wanted to state in as few words as possible with my poem. The illustration adds depth to the main meanings of the poem. It kind of wraps it all up in one picture. I feel not everything in a poem has to be explicitly stated and being able to use images now for our poems here, to help promote an idea, makes it so much easier to make a good point without having to display as much with text. 
      LikeReply 125 days ago

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