Exhale



Trauma bound and gagged, words swallowed whole, silent screams echo in the void, symphony of self destruction.

Chasing images cast by alter egos, mirrored memories, mistaken, misplaced, each one a mirage, just out of reach, identity crisis.

What exists beyond the reflections? A facade, a fractured contradiction. Illusions slip through trembling fingers, we run, relentless, breathless, fleeing fate that was never ours to escape, ego trip.

Yet through the fractures, light seeps in, growth induced through divine intervention. A battle fought with a broken will, where God’s grace, relentless and radiant, forms a foot stool to glory. Lessons learned and peace long yearned leading to a dominion well earned, reborn.

Ego shed.
Breathe again.

About this poem

A journey through trauma, identity crisis, and self-destruction, cycling through redemption and rebirth.

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Written on February 15, 2025

Submitted by sharona.reeves81 on February 15, 2025

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Sharona Reeves

 · 1981 · Florida

Sharona Reeves is a dedicated autism advocate and registered behavior technician currently pursuing a master's degree in applied behavior analysis. In her spare time, she indulges in free verse writing, a passion she has nurtured since childhood. Her interests span creative writing, hiking, and gardening as she continues to pursue her aspirations as a novelist. Originally from Tampa, FL, and raised in Memphis, TN, Sharona now resides in rural Mississippi. more…

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  • yelskwah
    The final lines, "Ego shed "and "Breathe again," powerfully affirm liberation and renewal. The ego's shedding suggests a release from the grip of trauma and the emergence of a new, more authentic self. The simple act of breathing symbolizes a return to life and a newfound sense of peace.

    "Exhale" is a beautifully crafted and emotionally resonant poem that explores the complexities of trauma and the transformative power of faith. You've captured the pain, confusion, and, ultimately, the hope that can emerge from the healing process, creating a cathartic and inspiring poem.
     
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • sharona.reeves81
      thank you for reading and providing such an insightful review
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    Your poem takes the reader on a powerful journey from darkness to light, beautifully capturing the internal struggles and the eventual healing. The vivid imagery and emotional depth reflect a deep transformation,truly moving and inspiring. 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • alanswansea18
    Beautiful your poems are like a fine wine, sweet to The taste I wish they were mine.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • sharona.reeves81
      always grateful for your kind words and encouragement - thank you for all your support
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • Akinpet23
    A deep breath out .

    Wonderful piece though ambiguous to assimilate.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • sharona.reeves81
      grateful for you! thank you for reading and engaging
      LikeReply1 month ago
    • Akinpet23
      I appreciate your kind gesture
      LikeReply 11 month ago

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