Echo Chambers And Standing Ovations



We build cathedrals in the dark,  
posts evaporate like breath on glass,
no footprints in the snow  
of our comment sections.  

Algorithms yawn at our persistence.  
The hashtag parade marches past,  
confetti of emojis raining  
on someone else’s sky.  

We learn the texture of silence:  
rough as unclicked links,  
heavy as a DM folder  
full of moths.  

But when a stranger’s cursor hovers,
when the favorite button flares  
like a struck match, when a reply  
unfurls its “This made me feel…”  

we become roadside diners  
lit up at midnight, sudden  
and necessary, our neon humming  
'You exist. You exist. You exist.'

Let the metrics bleed zeros.  
We’ll keep stacking bricks where no one looks.  
Every heart is a flare gun;  
every share, a slow clap  

gathering thunder.  

About this poem

For creators shouting into the void: a poem about building cathedrals in the dark, and what happens when someone finally strikes a match. Recognition isn’t the point, but oh, how it burns when it comes. The ache of creating in obscurity. The paradox of craving interaction vs. creating for its own sake. The electric, almost sacred, thrill of being witnessed.

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Written on February 15, 2025

Submitted by ThembieAngieeMt on February 14, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AXBC AXXX DXCX DEBX XXEX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 803
Words 158
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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8 Comments
  • mark.e.s
    Sometimes does not pay, to fly by night.
    LikeReply25 days ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    I felt the poem's words, this is really good and very well done!
    LikeReply 125 days ago
  • Akinpet23
    I love the flow of the poem
    LikeReply25 days ago
  • JokerGem
    I think obscurity is undervalued and something to be appreciated ...what’s really to be said of the 'discovered' ones, when the real work is still really done and done honestly where no one sees.
    Terrific subject , exceptional poem, and I quite like that title for it, as well. 
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      i love the way you put that,there's something special about creating in the unseen spaces. Really glad you connected with the poem, and I’m happy you liked the title too. Thanks so much for your kind words. 
      LikeReply 11 month ago
  • dawg4jesus
    I don't really understand tech language but I get the message. Good writing.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      Thank you! I'm glad the message came through. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • sharona.reeves81
    what a creative piece..the imagery is stunning: cathedrals built in the dark, footprints erased in the snow, a DM folder full of moths. The contrast between invisibility and those small moments of recognition is powerful. nice piece! 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      Thank you so much. I'm really glad the imagery stood out to you. I love playing with contrasts, so it means a lot that you noticed that. I appreciate your kind words.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • charlesedwardyork
    This is a really cool and interesting poem how it takes the aspects of modern communication on the Internet and sort of weaves this narrative of the connectivity or sometimes the disconnect that occurs with people. Your words make this a very compelling piece. I started to think about how I communicate with people and I realize that nothing is better than genuine. Direct contact in person with someone. This pace in a very sad way reminds me how I miss that and I take advantage of it every time it happens in real time in person. 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I love that the poem made you reflect on communication and connection,it’s such a complex, ever-changing thing. I completely agree that nothing compares to real, in-person moments. I appreciate your kind words and insight. 
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • susan.brumel
    Your good work should be acknowledged and praised. Well-written, with a creative theme. Nice!
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ThembieAngieeMt
      That’s so kind of you to say. I truly appreciate your support and encouragement. Thank you.
      LikeReply1 month ago

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