Stranger



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Stranger



I saw your retreating back, a shadow at the park.

Pierced eyes shield by clear glasses, dressed in black, your slender body moved swiftly through the fog.

Memories of what you did last night rolling over in my head.

Lips dry, I swallowed, standing next to my car like a statue.

What is this unwelcome yearning, warming my body, leaving my fingers cold like ice.

My toes are prickling and numb. You walk by, the stare is exhausting.

The words are stuck in my throat. They are completely incompetent to describe the feeling of lust, loss and longing.

Until we meet again my friend or enemy, whoever you are!

About this poem

This poem is about an invisible person who might or might not want to be seen.

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Written on September 27, 2024

Submitted by Smedley655 on February 14, 2025

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Scheme X X X X X A A X
Characters 631
Words 130
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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10 Comments
  • ladyygracious
    Strong and emotional piece that talks about wanting someone, missing them, and being unsure. The poet uses vivid descriptions to show how the speaker is feeling, creating a sense of tension and strong emotions. Many people can connect with these feelings, making the poem very engaging. Well Written 
    LikeReply 12 days ago
  • EvanYt1
    Lovely
    LikeReply 127 days ago
  • Farukahmedroni
    Excellent work.
    LikeReply 128 days ago
  • Merlenecandi
    Lovely
    LikeReply 128 days ago
  • yelskwah
    "Stranger" is a powerful and evocative poem that captures the intensity of a fleeting encounter and the lingering impact of a mysterious stranger. You've skillfully used sensory details and evocative imagery to create a sense of intrigue and a palpable longing. 
    LikeReply 128 days ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    interesting
    LikeReply29 days ago
  • Akinpet23
    Deep
    LikeReply 129 days ago
  • Smedley655
    Thank you
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    Haunting and evocative,this piece beautifully captures the tension between desire and distance. The imagery is striking, making the unseen feel vividly present. Well done.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • mark.e.s
    :)
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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