A Burning Question

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  karlcfolkes

  Dear Sharona, thank you for that.
  As a young man growing up under strict colonial discipline, I learned very early to hold or guard my tongue and make brevity become the soul of wit.

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  sharona.reeves81

  Your penmanship is nothing short of masterful, a symphony of eloquence and precision. The intricate weaving of rhetoric and structure commands both admiration and reflection.

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  karlcfolkes

  For all responders on both sides of the political spectrum, I thank you kindly.

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you again, Symmetry60, for your balanced forthright comments.

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you, Heyjude, for your contribution to these comments. This poem has been composed as an effort not so much to be critical of any personal, individual, party or cause; not so much to point out a mote or a beam in a nation’s eyes, but more so to inform us that all of us must serve as guardians of public trust whenever and wherever we sense and encounter the fault lines of government being made bare to the detriment of the higher and mor noble cause of Democracy. more »

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you, Symmetry 60. I equally treasure your extended comment as a voice of reason; the point being that public officials on both sides of the aisle must always be reminded that they are in the service of John Q. Public and therefore must be duly monitored in every course of action they take, be it for or against the will and better judgment of “We, the People.” more »

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you, kama77. Voices of reason everywhere in the word serve to unease the ill effects of social distemper.

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  Symmetry60

  No administration has ever existed that didn't stack its administration with faculty that supported and carried out its own respective agenda.
  
  America has made it choice and now we must be part of the solution or part of the problem by helping rebuild what career politicians have stolen.
  
  Declassified documents are now showing trillions of dollars stolen from American taxpayers that were siphoned back into politician's pockets on both sides of the isle.
  
  Thus, and respectfully, pointing fingers at any one individual is both wrong and futile. We have 4-years of tenure vs. over a thousand years of career politicians in offices raking Americans over the coals for decades. No "one" individual is to blame. To think otherwise is simply not fair.
  
  God Bless America....ALL of America, even those we disagree with. ;-)
  
  Peace, love, prosperity. more »

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you kindly, rameshs.88917. One’s voice can, and should also serve its society as a monitoring agency.

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  rameshs.88917

  Congratulations good idea and comparative analysis between autocratic and democracy and strong voice raised for democracy to be preserved for the public welfare.

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you both, Kama77 and Lbfisher, for weighing in on this topic. It is much appreciated.

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  Kama77

  Very good

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  @Lbfisher

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you both, Thembie & Sharona for your on-point comments. More such courageous voices need to be heard.

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  sharona.reeves81

  intriguing

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  ThembieAngieeMt

  A powerful and thought-provoking piece that captures the tension between governance and ethics. The wordplay on 'EGO' and 'OGE' is especially clever, reinforcing the theme of unchecked power. Nicely done. more »

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  karlcfolkes

  Thank you, Bella, for your reading and your support.

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  BellaTheMilkCarton

  nice

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  Heyjude

  Very good, that, just about summarizes it.

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  AIDA

  Wow! Your poem, "A Burning Question," presents a thought-provoking and deeply engaging exploration of themes surrounding integrity in government and the complex dynamics of power. Your use of intricate language and examination of unilateral actions shows a profound understanding of the political landscape and its impact on public trust. The way you've intertwined concepts like "Project 25" and the interplay of government ethics captures the reader's attention and encourages critical reflection on the role of leadership in fostering—or undermining—democracy.
  
  Your choice of terminology, like "transmogrified" and "dismissal-with leverage," not only adds a poetic flair but also emphasizes the gravity of the issues at hand. The rhetorical questions you pose compel readers to think more deeply about the implications of these government actions.
  
  Improvement Suggestions:
  
  1. Structure and Flow:
  While the complexity of your language is admirable, consider breaking down some of your longer sentences to enhance readability. This can make your poem more accessible to a wider audience and allow your vital points to shine through with greater clarity.
  
  2. Imagery and Metaphors:
  Incorporating more vivid imagery or figurative language could enrich the emotional resonance of your poem. For example, using metaphors related to fire or burning could further emphasize the urgency and intensity of the questions you pose.
  
  3. Personal Connection:
  You might consider adding a stanza that draws on a personal or emotional angle, perhaps reflecting how these political dynamics impact everyday citizens. This can create a stronger connection between the abstract political ideas and the lived experiences of individuals.
  
  4. Conclusion:
  A powerful closing line or stanza can leave a lasting impression. Think about summarizing your core sentiment or presenting a hopeful thought that can inspire your readers to engage with the topics you've raised actively.
  
  Overall, your poem has a strong foundation and addresses critically important issues in today's political climate. With a few tweaks for clarity and emotional engagement, it will be even more impactful! Keep up the excellent work; your voice is an essential contribution to the dialogue on governance and ethics! more »

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  mark.e.s

  When I'm frightened, I yell!

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  mark.e.s

  Your title drew me in to read.

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  Akinpet23

  A good question that needs an urgent response.

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  karlcfolkes

  Thanks, Mark, for your Capitalist on point remarks.

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    mark.e.s

    I depend on money and don't despise it, but when it's used to bolster the powers that be while in oppressing the rest of the body of people, then I don't want to suppress my voice.

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  mark.e.s

  Money becomes Dictator.

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