A Folk Song

Jessie Mackay 1864 (Rakaia Gorge) – 1938 (Christchurch)



I came to your town, my love,
   And you were away, away!
I said "She is with the Queen's maidens:
   They tarry long at their play.
They are stringing her words like pearls
To throw to the dukes and earls."
   But O, the pity!
I had but a morn of windy red
To come to the town where you were bred,
   And you were away, away!

I came to your town, my love,
   And you were away, away!
I said, "She is with the mountain elves
   And misty and fair as they.
They are spinning a diamond net
To cover her curls of jet."
   But O, the pity!
I had but a noon of searing heat
To come to your town, my love, my sweet,
   And you were away, away!

I came to your town, my love,
   And you were away, away!
I said, "She is with the pale white saints,
   And they tarry long to pray.
They give her a white lily-crown,
And I fear she will never come down."
   But O, the pity!
I had but an even grey and wan
To come to your town and plead as man,
   And you were away, away!

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABxbccDeeB ABxbffDggB ABxbhhDxxB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 969
Words 202
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10

Jessie Mackay

Jessie Mackay (1864 in Rakaia Gorge – 23 August 1938, in Christchurch) was a New Zealand poet and animal rights activist. more…

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