Last Boats In



Taratula falls amply, nimbly, cross the creek
as the albatross heaves another sordid goodbye
and lands dice the medley—for bread of eve
to commence.

Nell, there, sang a few there was never
dared a fowl—back to heel where knocked
a tour of grove in the root of all meanings
for her scarlet gown of waymind guspari tact,
and tithe unseen and not believed.

Sooth! —wherest dwelt then a thousand-
thousand ways to grow skyward chose
eight and nine paths for decay to claim
the knots in veins of a moss upon elm and
oak nearby seethes a beach—and bone was its
blush; for thistle and thrush was ground
to believe there would not have been
another way to rise and greet the dawn
in gladness unto freedom.

We are rejoiced, such a morning;
and the supreme Autumn way of all winds
converge. The meaning discloses naught how,
and the heart last sought to fish the pool.
Prophecy would ever believe to sunder the
wisdom of another eve, and for wrought
could never understand.

Forgotten, then, would have been mine;
and tomorrow we would call in the last
boats to gaze dimly into mist so longing.
Gloom upon silt knows graver, though;
and your eyes shine a glint promising
for worlds knew once of cheeks streaked
in tears—wreathed, indeed, of brine to pass.
Yesterday was the calling, and now
should become ours to realize.
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Submitted by StylesRobin on February 11, 2025

Modified by StylesRobin on March 09, 2025

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Scheme XXXX XXXXX AXXAXXAXX BXCXXXX XDBXBXDCX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,324
Words 249
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 9, 7, 9

Robin Styles

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Robin Styles Oliver is the poet of his wiser meaning for kindness and war. Everything contained therein is mediated content for the ardent and woeful communication of such, wherefore arises their unity for purpose, for meaning or lack and truth as such. more…

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  • ladyygracious
    What do you mean by 'yesterday's calling'? Is it a past opportunity or memory that we should reflect on and learn from to move forward?
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Powerfully pushing grammar and meaning to the hilt while at the same time maintaining a measured poetic balance to deliver within the poem a Sehnsucht or longing of lovers separated by time and space, seeking to hold on to memories of yesteryear midst the muck and the grime of the albatross of time, symbolized by the ever awaiting for that ‘last boat’ that will be the calling for ultimate rejoicing. 
    LikeReply 110 days ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    I love how imaginative this poem is, its lovely!
    LikeReply10 days ago
  • mark.e.s
    I'll have to read it a few times.
    LikeReply10 days ago
  • AIDA
    What a captivating and vivid poem you have crafted in "Last Boats In"! Your use of language is both imaginative and evocative, painting striking images that transport readers to a world where nature and emotion intertwine beautifully. Phrases like "the albatross heaves another sordid goodbye" and "to rise and greet the dawn in gladness" are particularly powerful; they create a sense of longing and hope that resonates deeply. Your ability to weave rich imagery with thought-provoking themes about life, nature, and freedom is impressive. The rhythm and flow of your lines draw readers in, making them want to linger in each moment you create.

    Improvement Suggestions:

    1. Clarity and Flow:
    While the poem’s abstract nature adds to its charm, some sections may benefit from clearer imagery or more accessible language. Consider simplifying certain phrases to ensure that the emotional core shines through without losing readers in complexity.

    2. Punctuation and Structure:
    Introducing more varied punctuation could enhance the reading experience. For instance, breaking longer sentences into shorter ones might amplify the rhythm and impact of key moments.

    3. Theme Development:
    The themes of freedom and rebirth are potent, yet they could benefit from a more explicit connection throughout the poem. Perhaps weaving in recurring motifs or symbols that emphasize these ideas would create a stronger thematic coherence.

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    You might explore expanding on the relationships between characters or elements in nature to deepen the emotional landscape. This could invite readers to connect more personally with the narrative.

    Overall, your poem is a remarkable creative expression that invites reflection and imagination. With a bit of refinement, it could achieve even greater depth and resonance! Keep writing; you have a unique voice that deserves to be heard.
     
    LikeReply10 days ago
  • yelskwah
    "Last Boat In" is a captivating and enigmatic poem that explores themes of loss, transformation, and the passage of time. You've skillfully employed a unique blend of invented words, archaic language, and evocative imagery to create a work that is both challenging and rewarding to decipher. 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • ThembieAngieeMt
    This feels like stepping into a dream ,rich, layered, and mysterious. The language is mesmerizing, almost like a forgotten myth coming to life.
    LikeReply1 month ago

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