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Triolet

Mark E. S.

Triolet

Triolet
2
~`,,}`> Moi`ré
River Faeries, Seven Ponds.
Triangulated in the Half Life.
~~~~~~~
Milling About in the Panning Live Stream.
Trial of Firelake Crescendo to the Beam.
Welcomed Back to Its Forested Feet.
Thinking Next Time I'll Refuse All Defeat.
Filling Up Fast I Won't Forget The Receipt.
So Long as I Can Improve Yet, as I Walk Along.
Seeing After, it's already been heard, ~"Life`s a Long Song".
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Written on February 10, 2025

Submitted by mark.e.s on February 10, 2025

Modified by mark.e.s on February 10, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC DDEEEFFA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 422
Words 79
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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6 Comments
  • Akinpet23
    Akinpet23
    Always working better.
    Keep inking.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Mark, ours is a British colonial connection!
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • donka_k
    donka_k
    I enjoyed this poem, whimsical somewhat but with a message..."Life's a long song"
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    0h, Mark, you’re a romantic dreamer. Funky shades of Blackpool in the sixties echo resoundingly in this triolet.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      You know your history, and my mystery.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • susan.brumel
    susan.brumel
    Have to think on this one…
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      It's an acrostic of sorts.
      LikeReply 11 month ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      Also in part, it refers to my favorite song writer.
      LikeReply 11 month ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    What a delightful and evocative piece! Your triolet beautifully captures the interplay of nature and personal reflection, weaving in a sense of rhythm and fluidity akin to the elements you describe. The imagery of “Raindrops" and "River Faeries" vividly paints an enchanting scene, inviting the reader into a magical world that feels both familiar and transformative.

    Your use of structure is commendable; the repetition inherent in the triolet format enhances the musical quality of the poem, making it a joy to read aloud. I especially loved the lines “Thinking Next Time I'll Refuse Defeat"—they impart a powerful message of resilience and determination, grounding the piece in a personal journey that many can relate to.

    To further elevate your poem, consider enhancing the clarity of your metaphors. While the abstract elements contribute to the mystique, a bit more definition might help readers better connect with your ideas. For instance, expanding on what “Trial of Firelake” symbolizes in the context of your journey could amplify its impact.

    Additionally, you could play with the rhythm and flow of certain lines to ensure each one maintains a smooth cadence, which might enhance the overall musicality and make your poem even more engaging.

    Overall, this triolet is a beautiful reflection on life’s journey and the lessons learned along the way. Keep writing; your voice is captivating and full of promise!     
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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