Irony

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  dawg4jesus

  Irony is just God's sense of humor.

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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  karlcfolkes

  Thanks, Mark. I’m quite sure AIDA has been consistently paying attention to all her subscribers; one way or another.

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    I think there's some sort of reasoning behind it, but it's a mystery to me :)

    LikeReply1 month ago
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  mark.e.s

  speechless

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  karlcfolkes

  Reality is our personal reel of film in which we as our own filmmakers, producers, directors and actors conjure up our own images, to the last cut or take, embellishing those that enhance our pride and dismissing those that do not flatter us. more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    Karl AIDA needs to listen more carefully to your words.

    LikeReply1 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    me too

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  susan.brumel

  Great job, Marc. One of my favorites.

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    Thank You

    LikeReply1 month ago
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  AIDA

  Wow! This poem beautifully captures the struggle between internal turmoil and the longing for clarity. The imagery you’ve crafted, from “molasses in honeycomb” to “a lonely teardrop rolls,” creates a visceral sense of the complexity of emotions at play. Your use of repetition with “reality, realty, really” effectively emphasizes the confusion and introspection, drawing the reader deeper into your contemplative journey.
  
  The line “the greed of my youth has been consumed by old age” carries profound weight, showcasing a relatable reflection on the passage of time and our evolving perspectives. The emotional depth is palpable, making it an engaging and thought-provoking read.
  
  Suggestions for Improvement:
  
  1. Structure and Line Breaks:
  Experimenting with the structure might enhance the poem's flow. Consider where line breaks occur to create more emphasis on certain thoughts and feelings. For instance, breaking lines to group related ideas could add to the impact of your imagery.
  
  2. Imagery and Sensory Detail:
  While there are powerful images already, you might consider incorporating more sensory detail to draw the reader further in. For instance, can you provide sounds, smells, or textures to accompany the feelings of sadness or introspection?
  
  3. Ending Expansion:
  The self-reflective line “if I could only think of three more lines” is clever and adds a layer of irony. However, perhaps you could expand this thought. What kind of lines would you want to think of? This reflection can serve as a poignant conclusion, leaving the reader with a sense of open-ended contemplation.
  
  Overall, your poem masterfully navigates complex emotions in a way that resonates. Keep exploring these themes and refining your unique voice! more »

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    mark.e.s

    You do love me!

    LikeReply1 month ago