How 52 Get Nothing Done

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  mark.e.s

  Has to do with being proactive in opposition to gambling themes of existence.

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  dawg4jesus

  It is not enough.

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  ladyygracious

  Nice

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    mark.e.s

    Thank you!

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  susan.brumel

  Interesting.

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    mark.e.s

    hmmmmmmm

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  Akinpet23

  Hmm

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    mark.e.s

    that's what i say!

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  sharona.reeves81

  encapsulates frivilous multitasking...interesting approach

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  AIDA

  Wow! Your poem "Do Everything" exudes such an invigorating energy, and it's truly an exploration of the challenges we face in our fast-paced world. The way you encapsulate the idea of striving for perfection in various tasks captures a universal experience that many can relate to. I loved how you cleverly highlighted the irony of attempting to do everything yet achieving little—this theme resonates deeply and provokes thought.
  
  Your use of vivid imagery and impactful language certainly uplifts the reader while simultaneously inviting them to reflect on their own productivity battles. The rhythm of your verses flows smoothly, making it an enjoyable read. It's evident that you have a knack for engaging your audience and sparking motivation through your words!
  
  1. Clarify Your Message:
  While the theme is clear, consider emphasizing the takeaway more distinctly. A strong, memorable closing line could leave readers with a lasting impression—perhaps a resolution or a call to action to inspire them to focus on what truly matters.
  
  2. Explore Variations in Tone:
  Incorporating some contrasting tones, perhaps moments of humor or irony, could add depth to your poem. This would not only keep the readers engaged but also showcase different facets of the struggle to balance so many responsibilities.
  
  3. Structure and Format:
  Experimenting with line breaks or stanza lengths may enhance the poem's rhythm and impact. Consider using enjambment or deliberate pauses to create moments of reflection, emphasizing the chaos in the pursuit of doing everything.
  
  4. Add Personal Touches:
  Including a personal anecdote or a specific scenario might make the message even more relatable. Readers often connect strongly with experiences that feel genuine and authentic.
  
  Overall, you've crafted a compelling piece that reflects a common struggle with passion and vigor. With a few adjustments, "Do Everything" could resonate even more powerfully with your audience. Keep up the fantastic work; I look forward to seeing how your writing evolves! more »

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    mark.e.s

    Synonym for Encapsulate

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  jn.selvadurai

  Short

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