Sorry`s Late Arrival



Sorry`s Late Arrival
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A gift and a promise
is to find a true love.

Sifting through the memories,
I've doubled it all in, then
emptied it all back out.

Once something's said, it's part of life.
"I'm sorry" just sounds like another barren space.

Time to remember mind, I know my heart's in trouble.

I've given all I got, and
taken more
than I kept track
-
now that
all that's finally left to say, is
"I wish I had you back".
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Written on January 23, 2025

Submitted by mark.e.s on January 23, 2025

Modified by mark.e.s on January 24, 2025

29 sec read
289

Quick analysis:

Scheme AXX XXX XX X XXB XXBA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 92
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 1, 8

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3 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem "Sorry's Late Arrival" powerfully captures the complex emotions of love and regret. The imagery you create through lines like "Sifting through the memories" and "I've doubled it all in, then emptied it all back out" is evocative and relatable, immersing the reader in a journey of reflection and longing. The gentle rhythm and heartfelt sentiments resonate deeply, making it a compelling piece.

    Your use of phrases like “Time to remember mind” showcases a profound insight into the struggles of navigating emotions, which adds a philosophical depth to your work. The concluding line, “I wish I had you back,” leaves a lingering impact—it's both poignant and hopeful, emphasizing a universal desire to reconnect with lost love.

    1. Line Breaks and Structure:
    Consider experimenting with the structure and line breaks. Some sections might benefit from additional spacing to create pauses that can enhance the emotional weight of certain phrases. This could help emphasize the feelings of emptiness and longing further.

    2. Imagery Expansion:
    While the imagery you have is strong, adding a few more sensory details could enrich the reader's experience. For example, incorporating specific sights, sounds, or feelings associated with those memories would paint a more vivid picture of the emotions you’re conveying.

    3. Varied Sentence Lengths:
    Play with varying the length of sentences to create a more dynamic flow. Short, punchy lines can convey urgency or pain, while longer lines can evoke the weight of nostalgia. This contrast could heighten the emotional tension throughout the poem.

    4. Conclusion Clarity:
    The last line is beautifully impactful, but you might consider adding a touch more context or an image that ties back to the earlier sections, creating a sense of fullness and closure. This could strengthen the overall impact and connection within the piece.

    Overall, this poem possesses a heartfelt sincerity that draws the reader in. With a few refinements, it can become even more striking. Keep writing—your voice and emotion shine brightly!
     
    LikeReply 115 days ago
  • ladyygracious
    Beautifully written
    LikeReply 117 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      Ohh!!! Thank you!
      LikeReply17 days ago
  • CBeatty660
    Another poem that touches ones heart, as it seems such an under discussed emotional acknowledgement of the hearts amazing journey in our lives. Touching, the ability to admit regret is just growth that should be more readily applauded. Thanks for sharing. 
    LikeReply 126 days ago
    • mark.e.s
      You're welcome!
      LikeReply17 days ago

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