Our Bliss
In each fleeting moment, our love takes flight,
A thousand lifetimes cherished in a single sight.
If I were the wind, and you were the sand,
I would sweep you to paradise, sifting you in my hand.
On a lonely beach, just you and me,
Our love would bloom, wild and free.
If raindrops were love, a monsoon would reign,
Drenching the earth in an endless, tender chain.
We'd swim in love, an eternal sea,
A flood that binds us, eternally.
Our memories, an eternity of touch,
Fingers tracing your face, I cherish you so much.
If eternal thoughts were captured in time,
They'd be only of you, love so sublime.
Thank you for seeing, for loving me true,
You are my blessing, my heart belongs only to you.
Inside I am burning for thee, Thank you for eternity…
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Written on January 22, 2025
Submitted by ChasmOfPoetry on January 23, 2025
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| Scheme | AABB CCDD CCEE FFGG C |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 766 |
| Words | 159 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
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