The Discovery Bubble

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  Byfaithjaynak

  I love this poem, it was beautifully written

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    Thank you.

    LikeReply1 month ago
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  AIDA

  What a beautifully introspective piece you’ve created with "The Discovery Bubble"! Your use of metaphor to describe the complexities of truth and self-perception is both clever and relatable. The idea of being a "bubble" encapsulates the fragility of trust and identity in a profound way. I particularly appreciated how you contrasted the concepts of strength and weakness, which adds depth and dimension to the poem.
  
  Your rhythmic structure and rhyme scheme convey a nice flow that guides the reader through your emotional landscape. Lines like "When the truth's hard to see, that's when you are my eyes" are particularly striking, as they highlight the importance of connection and support in navigating difficult truths.
  
  For improvement, consider expanding on the metaphor of the "bubble" further, exploring what it means to both be delicate and resilient. Perhaps you could include more sensory imagery that evokes a feeling of being within a bubble, enabling readers to feel the weight of those emotions more deeply. Also, tightening the rhythm in some lines could enhance the poem’s overall musicality.
  
  Overall, this is a delightful and thought-provoking poem that encourages readers to reflect on the nature of truth and companionship. Keep writing and sharing your unique voice! more »

  LikeReply 21 month ago
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  robertl.92681

  Very nice

  LikeReply 22 months ago
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    mark.e.s

    Thanks.

    LikeReply1 month ago