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Polar Shifts to Real

Mark E. S.

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Polar Shifts to Real
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will someone please, answer the door
let the celebration begin,
just not in my chair

i had a special reason,
for which i placed it there

the sun will only shine until the pawl of evening

the dark sky only lasts until the ensuing sunrise calls

there's no action without opposition,
and nothing to unmarry them

I wish I could see a single sunny day that would last forever.

i want to use caution in asking

yet

preceded by a rainbow firework,
rain was teeming again in my valentine heart
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Written on January 12, 2025

Submitted by mark.e.s on January 12, 2025

Modified by mark.e.s on January 15, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA BA C X BX X C XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 492
Words 103
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2
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9 Comments
  • ladyygracious
    ladyygracious
    And it fit just perfectly.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Thank you for sharing your poem, "Polar Shifts to Real." It’s evident that you’ve woven together rich imagery and emotion that resonates with the reader. The metaphor of the sun and the cycles of day and night beautifully represents the theme of change and contrast, which adds depth to your poem. Your playful tone in the opening lines draws the reader in, creating an inviting atmosphere that encourages them to engage with your work.

    Your use of contrasts—light and dark, celebration and caution—effectively conveys the complexities of life and emotions. The line about wanting to see a single sunny day that lasts forever is particularly poignant, striking a balance between hope and the inevitability of change. The mention of “rainbow firework” adds a surprising and vivid twist that enhances the sensory experience of the poem.

    For improvement, consider expanding on the emotional journey. You might explore deeper reflections on why the speaker feels conflicted about the celebration. Including a few more vivid sensory details could enhance the atmosphere, allowing readers to feel more immersed in your world. Also, you might want to clarify the closing thoughts—it feels a bit unexpected, and a slight elaboration could give it greater impact.

    Overall, you have a captivating piece here with a wonderful interplay of emotions and images. Keep writing and experimenting with your voice! Your unique perspective shines through, and I can’t wait to see how your work evolves.     
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • ladyygracious
    ladyygracious
    Nice one
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    jn.selvadurai
    Well done.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Dear Mark,
    I suspect this poem aptly depicts your whimsical, even teasing nature; perhaps adorable to many, yet less tolerantly so to some others. I like it!
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • gary_dean
    gary_dean
    Waxing and waning is fine for most things, less so for relationships. Well written.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • dsherman610
    dsherman610
    The flow of your writing is really good. I found it easy to follow and understand. Well done
    LikeReply 12 months ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      Thanks very much.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    BellaTheMilkCarton
    nice
    LikeReply 12 months ago
  • susan.brumel
    susan.brumel
    This is very good! So creative. The opposing feelings you describe in simple phrases, the push and pull of life, love. Last two lines are my favorite.
    LikeReply 12 months ago
    • mark.e.s
      mark.e.s
      Thank you!!!
      LikeReply 11 month ago

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