Lonesome Advice
So in this one conclusion
I realize the only solution
Is some sort of blanket isolation
Although I've always thought
That I could become a part
Of a love with my damaged heart
It's sad - I never could achieve
And really: who would believe
Of how I created this my darkened scene
I pay a costly price
For being not so nice
Much too late to take your good advice
While others lives have worsened
By meeting with this dead end
I look around and miss my dear friend
Not to worry for the next days
It's just the price I have to pay
I wish I could fix all the yesterdays
I'll just keep going through the motions
And try to stifle my emotions
And end the day by faking I'm not lonesome
About this poem
Just thinking about how one didn't listen to advice.
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Written on January 11, 2025
Submitted by dominodave on January 11, 2025
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| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 696 |
| Words | 152 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
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