Windows



Windows


Window’s worn
wooden teeth,
tightly clasped
Moldy sill
set beneath
cracked
yellowed glass.

Walls watched
with pity
a soul dehydrated
Once joyful
and giddy,
Now, sad and ill-fated…

Reconciled to
the moment,
I started to weep —
In spite of
the torment,
I fell fast to sleep…

Dreams took me away
to a radiant room,
Bright walls adorned
with sunflower blooms —
Honeybees feasting
on full nectar moons.

Through wide
open window,
A gentling
warm breeze,
filled the cold
empty spaces in me —
I felt my body
rise and restart,
Dancing to music
that played in my heart!

Words, wild
and winsome
skipped
through my mind,
slipped
down my tongue
in rhythms
and rhymes…

Warm undulations
flowed into me —
waves of elation
and sweet release!
At once,
in that magical moment
I knew,
I was finally at peace,
Free —
to live life anew.

About this poem

Sometimes in our lives, we feel trapped and closed off from life, or even from ourselves. Then, something or someone happens to us, that helps us to be free to live again.

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Written on January 01, 2025

Submitted by susan.brumel on January 10, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXAXB XCXXCX DEFXXF XXXXGX XXGXXCCHXH XXIXIXXX BCXJXEDJCD
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 880
Words 192
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 6, 6, 10, 8, 10

Susan Mayer Brumel

A few years ago, I retired from a thirty-five year career in hospice counseling, at which time I began writing poetry. My poems are influenced by my patients’ journeys, the compelling beauty of nature, and the human condition. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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11 Comments
  • philmaund
    Once again, your powerful mastery of the metaphor delights!
    LikeReply7 days ago
  • Darkness
    What a lovely piece of poetry.
    LikeReply8 days ago
  • amandak
    Beautiful
    LikeReply 19 days ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Beautifully done Susan. Writing and reading poetry too can provide the window to free us from doldrums.
    LikeReply 29 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Absolutely! Thank you so much.
      LikeReply9 days ago
  • npirandy
    Keep ' em coming Susie. They help pull me through the doldrums. Your vision, wit, and talent are always refreshing.
    LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you, Randy. I’ll do my best! :-)
      LikeReply9 days ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    nice
    LikeReply 19 days ago
  • Adroity
    This is really amazing!!!
    Good job!!!
    LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you, so much. It’s good to hear from you! Hope all is well. :-)
      LikeReply9 days ago
  • rameshs.88917
    Wow , a beautiful example of enduring myth of your personal life. A palindrome which was more popular genre in 20th century literature.Like P B Shelley poems - attitudes towards life on one hand as immensely pessimistic and on the other hand extremely optimistic. Where there is a will there is a way. Being in gloomy mood you have chosen outstanding way to lessen the depressed life - that is black ink and that makes you indifferent from others. As a consequence, wonderful masterpieces are penned down by you . Thine emotions, bitter and sweet are reflected in your rhymes. And thus the practices of literary creativity paved platform for accumulating peace and harmony in life. I hat off your uses of ornamented language - imageries metaphors that help to bring to the light of your inner feelings and thoughts. Congratulations Ma'am, See my guessing working or not . 
    LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments, Ramesh. I will need to read some Shelley now to see which poems you are referring to.
      Thank you again for your support of my poetry.
      LikeReply 19 days ago
    • rameshs.88917
      Erudite Poetess ,you are familiar with the poem of Shelley - Stanzas Written in Dejection , Near Naples. Specially in Shelley's life we get touch of pessimism almost .
      LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you for mentioning Shelley’s poem. I read it, and liked it very much. I could see what you were referring to. As always, Ramesh, thank you for your support and kind words.
      LikeReply 18 days ago
    • rameshs.88917
      It's thine nobility,Your Highness, me a learner only in world poetry plz.
      LikeReply8 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    A Window to the Soul offering us always, if we care to look deep within ourselves, bountiful chances of renewal, rejuvenation, satisfaction; and even completion. Thank you for this positively curative message of hope. 
    LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      You’re so welcome, Karl. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
      LikeReply9 days ago
  • mark.e.s
    That's a 5-star poem.
    LikeReply 19 days ago
  • Symmetry60
    Such a beautiful introspective piece, Susan. For whatever inspired it, I hope the tradition continues to evoke amazing poetry like this from you. I assume this was the little ones??? Seems right up your Allie. ;-) 
    LikeReply 19 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you, my dear friend. No, not the little ones.
      LikeReply9 days ago

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