A Bullet Train to Hong Kong at the End of the Year



A Bullet Train to Hong Kong at the End of the Year
By William He

With whistling wheels the buffer chinks.
Gathering the momentum,
The rhythm from magnetic fields,
It screams and cleaves the dark.
Bewitched steels grinding against shadow of the bay,
Men might change the tracks to which they lead.
The New Territories,
Unleashing a series of flying sparks.
She standing beside and breathing the chill in silence,
Her head speaks of old regret,
It seems cold air into her thirsty spirit here.
A warren of railway tunnels,
The Hades through the cars.

A yellow halo as the result of a collision between two worlds.
A cool breeze blowing outside,
Remembrance of the days gone by,
Waking from the Central's dream.
The bright pearls tugged on like an endless lyric,
Leaving lingering taste and remaining touch.
Picture of friction,
Splendor cartoons are spliced.
Life is incredibly complex as in the prose of Gertrude Stein.
A wintery downtown scene,
The mind swimming with turning neon lamps.
The hands upon the clock above
Appear to be captured and frozen.

贺新郎 岁末开往香港的高铁列车
作者:何威廉

追暗黄光缕。
动离弦、
逆双曲面,
溅银飞雨。
维港磁针才招引,
凉轨离心私语。
过新界、
轮音渐聚。
窗上游移谁秀靥,
作揖时、
睇眼神蒙瞽。
浑未觉,
在圜府。

正冲碎电弧灯柱。
凛凛风、
载梦前行,
中环倒序。
潜寐明珠三千颗,
进入飞车编组。
蹭暗壁、
蛇弓白羽。
忽地霓灯寒气扫。
九龙西、
争按新声谱。
拼线索,
谁堪主。

About this poem

A poem that delves deep into the themes of time, memory, modernity, and personal reflection. Through vivid and often fragmented imagery, The Author captures the sensory experience of a train journey and uses it as a metaphor for the complexities of life. The poem moves between the fast-paced, technological world of the train and the slower, introspective world of memory and nostalgia. It is a reflection on the tension between the past and the present, the old and the new, and the ways in which time shapes both our personal experiences and our collective histories. The poem’s structure and language mirror the fractured, nonlinear nature of memory and time, offering readers a glimpse into a moment of transition—both physical and existential—that speaks to universal themes of change, loss, and reflection. 

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Written on December 31, 2024

Submitted by chinamcc8 on December 31, 2024

Modified by chinamcc8 on December 31, 2024

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Stanza Lengths 2, 13, 13, 2, 13, 13

William He

William Yu He graduated from two of the most prestigious law schools in China respectively, also studied in Heidelberg, Cambridge and Harvard. He has published dozens of classical poems and lyrics in Chinese language. Ten classic-style Chinese poems have been included in a poetry anthology published by a famous publishing house in Hong Kong. Three of his poems were collected in the anthology “call my name and I 'll be there" published in February, 2024. He is know for five of his poems included in the anthology in English "Dancing on Moonbeams" published in USA in September, 2024. He already published his English poetry anthology "Eyes Wide Open: Poems by William He" in USA. more…

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8 Comments
  • Elanele
    Your poem is intricate,
    Its turns of phrase are elegant.
    As the train disappears into the distance,
    Time itself has no seconds left.
    I like being part of your story,
    Watching as light sparks in the tunnels of underground labyrinths—
    The very light that gives birth to lines,
    In which centuries move,
    Like the Hong Kong–Zhuhai Bridge in the morning mist.
     
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • robertl.92681
    Fantastic imagery
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • Darkness
    Compelling use of atmospheric description but falls short in terms of coherency and doesn't quite hit its mark.
    LikeReply13 days ago
  • susan.brumel
    Your depiction of time and our complex experiences through it are addressed so interestingly and so well. Great work.
    LikeReply15 days ago
    • chinamcc8
      I'm glad you found my perspective on time and our experiences intriguing. It's always a pleasure to explore such complex themes, and I'm happy to hear that it resonated with you.
      LikeReply15 days ago
  • Akinpet23
    A great piece indeed!
    LikeReply17 days ago
  • yelskwah
    I was particularly struck by the lines about the "whistling wheels," the "yellow halo," and the "wintery downtown scene." The poem's journey from outside to inside, both literally and metaphorically, is very compelling. The inclusion of the original Chinese text adds a unique and powerful dimension. 
    LikeReply20 days ago
    • chinamcc8
      I'm happy that the journey from outside to inside—both physically and metaphorically—resonated with you. The inclusion of the original Chinese text was an intentional choice to capture some of the nuances and emotional depth that might not come across in translation alone, so it's great to hear that it added to your experience of the poem. 
      LikeReply20 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Comparing the bullet flight of the train with the fanciful flight of the mind; the former transversing physical time and space, from the ‘old’ year to the ‘new’ year; the latter traversing mental time and space within the psychological framework of an Einstein model in which time and space are both relative. 
    LikeReply23 days ago
    • chinamcc8
      I’m glad you found the comparison insightful. The imagery of the train’s bullet-like trajectory, marking the passage of time from one year to the next, alongside the mind’s free-ranging movement through psychological space, captures the dual nature of temporal experience. It’s a good metaphor that connects the linear, measurable world with the more fluid and subjective realm of thought. 
      LikeReply23 days ago
  • BellaTheMilkCarton
    nice
    LikeReply24 days ago

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