A Strong Dose



I finally got some sleep
Finally now I can breathe
A feeling which I haven't felt in weeks

I dreamt that we were free
Escaping from all the fear
Still not knowing of what is real

We watched our crumbling dreams
Awake we just disagree
As the mirror laughs at me

A creature of habit for all to see
In love we should never be
This is my dose of reality
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Written on December 28, 2024

Submitted on December 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AXX XAA AAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 355
Words 77
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3

david misquez

 · 1967 · California

I have been writing for several years never thinking that I would share. more…

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    "A Strong Dose" is a well-organized poem that illustrates the importance of sharing. is a well-structured poem that exemplifies why sharing is caring.
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