Flawed Intuition



i saw the cracks
in the foundation long ago,
the mortar crumbling,
the lies seeping through.
this whole structure,
built on dogma and fear,
it’s always been a house of cards.

so i walked.

no grand gesture,
no fiery speech.
just a quiet departure into the messy,
uncertain, beautiful chaos
of my own making.
no map, no guide,
only the flickering compass
of my own flawed intuition.
the night is vast,
but it’s mine. 
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Written on December 10, 2024

Submitted by JoeStrickland on December 10, 2024

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Words 94
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 1, 10

Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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