In Memory's Absence



Who lies within this sterile room bound by shadows of the past?
It is a man confined by time’s cruel grasp.
His memories lost like leaves that flee,
From thirty years, no trace to see.

He gazed at faces, strange and new,
Children once loved, he no longer knew.
But then she came- a face from the past-
A love forgotten now surfaced at last.

Her steps were soft, her heart unsure,
For the years of silence she'd endured.
Yet as he saw her, his tears did flow
A memory stirred from long ago.

He reached for her hand, though words were few
And mumbled sounds she almost knew.
Her name escaped his memory yet his soul spoke clear,
“Do not leave me; stay near, stay near.”

She held his hand; his grip was tight,
A tether to love through the endless night.
In his sleep, he found his peace,
But her heart wrestled, longing for release.

For decades past, she craved his care
A love unspoken, a bond laid bare.
But now, with time’s cruel sleight of hand,
He clung to her, a broken man.

The life he’d lived was gone, erased,
Yet here was love she’d once embraced.
She wondered if fate’s cruel jest was kind
To leave him whole or trapped in time.

A lesson gleamed from pain and years,
Through fleeting joy and endless tears:
Love unspoken can fade away,
But true hearts linger, come what may.

Do not withhold the love you feel
For life moves swiftly, its hands won’t heal.
Let each embrace, each word, each day,
Reflect the love you’d give away.

So, as she sat by his frail bedside
Her heart spoke truths she’d long denied.
For even if time erases all,
The heart remembers love’s first call.

About this poem

The poem was inspired by real-life situation. It recounts the poignant story of a man who, after a hemorrhagic stroke, loses his past 30 years of memories, including recognition of his children and family. However, when an old love—the mother of his children—visits him in the hospital, his emotional connection to her resurfaces. Though he doesn't remember her name or their shared history, his tears and actions reveal the deep love he once felt for her. She is torn between wishing for his recovery, which could erase this rekindled affection, or wanting him to remain in this state, where the love she craved long ago is finally expressed. The poem delivers an important message: to express love openly and cherish connections in the present, as life and time are unpredictable, and unspoken love can be lost to regret. 

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Written on December 07, 2024

Submitted by marguerite_a on December 07, 2024

Modified by marguerite_a on December 30, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBB CCAA XXDD CCEE FFGG HHXX IIXX JJKK LLKK MMNN
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,612
Words 337
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Marguerite C. Anderson

 · 1971 · Kingston

Marguerite C. Anderson is a teacher of English and Literature at secondary level. She was born in Kingston, Jamaica but migrated to the Turks & Caicos Islands after being offered a teaching position in 2007, on the island of North Caicos. She credits her writing to the impact of her teachers of Literature - most notably- her high-school teacher, Mrs. Anne Girvan and her university professors/renowned Jamaican poets, Edward Baugh and Mervyn Morris. In the face of the COVID-19 pandemic, Anderson was afforded the time to pen her thoughts and hence, wrote and published her first anthology of poems, titled, "Echoes From The Naked Soul". More recently (2024), she published her 2nd collection of poetry titled "I Exist On this Page". Both poetry books are available on Amazon worldwide. Anderson also authors children's educational books for ages 5-12 years. Anderson's poems are an exploration of the human experience and delve greatly into themes such as love, motherhood, childhood experiences, loss, aging, religiousity, resilience, and female sexuality. more…

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  • ladyygracious
    LikeReply22 days ago
  • Probably
    Почитаю другие ваши стихи
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • marguerite_a
      Мне бы хотелось услышать, что вы о них думаете. Не могли бы вы зайти к некоторым из них и оставить комментарий?
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • Probably
    Не могу найти плюсов,
    В этом произведении, потому что их нет.
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • marguerite_a
      Из вашего комментария вы имеете в виду, что стихотворение настолько грустное, что ничего поло�
      ительного от него не отнять? 
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • chitown525
    That was Absolutely Beautiful Full Stop!!
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • marguerite_a
      Thank you so much. I hope you'll continue to read more of my poems.
      LikeReply1 month ago

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