Words Upon A Page



Words Upon A Page

Your words ignite my spirit,
when its light begins to dim
And laugh out loud along with me,
when I’m happy once again

Sometimes they mock my own words,
with a quip and haughty tease
Then return with warm assurances,
that put me quick at ease

I don’t know how it happened,
that our friendship came to be
In our world of separate spaces,
it remains a mystery…

How with just some words upon a page,
lacking sight and sound and touch
About the other person,
we could learn so very much

And feel deep and lasting friendship,
growing stronger every day —
Never looking in each other’s eyes,
and though many miles away

Reflections of two open hearts,
in metaphor and rhyme
Souls discovering each other,
in virtual space in time

With only words to bind them,
to friendship ever true —
I’m so grateful for the written words,
that brought me close to you.

About this poem

On Thanksgiving, we give thanks and are grateful for the special people in our lives. Friends, old and new, and those we’ve made on platforms like this one- without ever meeting in person. This poem explores the mystery of making friends in our virtual reality, and how very real they can be. Happy Thanksgiving to all celebrating today, and to all of you, celebrating friendship every day.

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Written on October 05, 2025

Submitted by susan.brumel on November 28, 2024

Modified by susan.brumel on November 28, 2024

54 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XXBX CDED XBEB AFXF XGXG XHXH XICI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 889
Words 182
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

A few years ago, I retired from a thirty-five year career in hospice counseling, at which time I began writing poetry. My poems are influenced by my patients’ journeys, the compelling beauty of nature, and the human condition. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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8 Comments
  • dawg4jesus
    Very strong and loving. Well expressed. Thank you.
    LikeReply 110 days ago
  • philmaund
    The power of words! Ironic that it can't be adequately expressed in words!
    LikeReply 110 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Yes, ironic indeed. Sometimes feelings elude description!
      LikeReply 110 days ago
  • Xuan-An
    profound and heartfelt. really good poem.
    LikeReply 110 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you for your kind words.
      LikeReply10 days ago
  • Vixility
    Oh man, this couldn’t be truer! Over the years I have developed so many deep and meaningful friendships with individuals I hold dear and even love (you included, Sue). These relationships have enriched my life and have made me a better person. In fact, I could hardly imagine what kind of person I would be without them.

    Such a wonderful topic and wonderful poem, Sue.
     
    LikeReply 110 days ago
    • Vixility
      … and I love the fact that some of those friends are in this very comment thread.
      LikeReply 110 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      You’re so sweet, John. It is my pleasure to be friends with you too. I just recently shared the poem you wrote about nature- The hawk I think, and the poor little critter he caught. I’m sorry, the details are escaping me at the moment. My brother is an artist and a nature lover, and I wanted him to see how that poem makes a painting of itself pop into your head when you read it…So happy to see you popping up on the site again! 
      LikeReply10 days ago
  • ronan.collins.89
    Very warm feeling
    LikeReply 110 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them very much.
      I would love to read your poetry when you post them on the site. Btw, Ireland is one of my most favorite places, filled with lovely people. :-) 
      LikeReply10 days ago
    • ronan.collins.89
      ah can you not see my poems? I have two posted on my page but I can't afford the site. I struggle financially because I've cystic fibrosis
      LikeReply10 days ago
  • Symmetry60
    Since we talk nearly every day, I'm taking this one personal and to heart. We've learned a lot you and I, Miss Brumel, a LOT. The pleasure has been all mine, albeit I know there is a generality to the poem, nonetheless, we both know how we both cherish this friendship. So let us be bitten, so let us be fun. ;-) 
    LikeReply 211 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      I am proud to say this poem was inspired by you and written for you, Mr. Dupere. Our friendship is very dear to me, and one I will always cherish…
      But can’t we just ‘be fun’ without the ‘be bitten’ part? Sounds awfully painful. ;-p 
      LikeReply 210 days ago
  • katongochanda1
    Indeed, worlds upon a page never dies ..!!! Your poems rejuvenates our souls... we are humbled to have you here Susan The Great ..
    LikeReply 111 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      You are too kind, my friend. Thank you for the smile
      LikeReply11 days ago
  • JokerGem
    Nice sentiment, Susie ...l think it's safe to say some of us only have virtual friends.
    LikeReply 311 days ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you, Jeffrey. It is my pleasure to be friends with you. :-)
      LikeReply 211 days ago

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