A Flame of Love Aloft a Mountain Peak

Karl Constantine FOLKES

Acrostic

She stands engraved in memory as a flame.

Her friendly spirit soaring on a hilltop high.

Immensely shining bright, aloft a mountain top.

Kindling with her brethren in celestial realms.

Hovering now as a guardian angel of us all.

Above the stratosphere, in residence with her kinsfolk.

Discerning what our hearts and souls reveal.

A twinkle in her gentle eyes tells us it’s all right.

Let tears not hinder then what the heart expresses.

A love for one who brightened many lives.

Let love forever glorify that shining flame aloft the mountain peak.

About this poem

This acrostic poem memorializes the life of educator, Shikha Dalal, who served as a Bilingual Resource Specialist at the Asian Languages Bilingual Education Technical Assistance Center (ALBETAC) of the New York State Education Department in New York. This poem highlights her first and last names which together symbolize the pleasant glow of a gentle flame shining perpetually aloft a mountain top.

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Written on November 04, 2024

Submitted by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

Modified by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme	X X X X X A X X X X A
Closest metre	Iambic hexameter
Characters	560
Words	115
Stanzas	11
Stanza Lengths	1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

· 1935 · Portland

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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shuh.84154
Great poem sir
LikeReply5 days ago
karlcfolkes
Oh, Alan, the family loves you for loving it!
LikeReply7 days ago
alanswansea18
I love it.
LikeReply7 days ago
karlcfolkes
Greatly appreciated, Arman. Thanks.
LikeReply22 days ago
Arman_1
Inspired
LikeReply22 days ago
karlcfolkes
Thank you Gisela. Shikha dearly loved children, and as an educator of international background, reached out compassionately to improve the education of English language learners.
LikeReply27 days ago
karlcfolkes
Gisela, your comment is so comforting. We thank you.
LikeReply27 days ago
Giselavigil
As a retired bilingual educator this resonated with me. What a lovely tribute to a person that touched your heart. Well done.
LikeReply27 days ago
karlcfolkes
Thank you, Emile, for your thoughtfulness. It is greatly appreciated.
LikeReply29 days ago
Emile
Dear Karl! Thank you for this art work it was really a pleasure to read.
LikeReply1 month ago
karlcfolkes
Thank you all kindly for your votes and your comments. We are all here in service to one another. That is our divine calling that the more discerning among us discover.
LikeReply 11 month ago
debraw.71122
Nice write thanks for sharing
LikeReply1 month ago
karlcfolkes
Thank you so much Bryan. Shikha was always telling us how special you were to her. She admired your caring compassionate spirit.
LikeReply1 month ago
karlcfolkes
Thank you both, jonsaviours and mfortney2538. Greatly appreciated.
LikeReply1 month ago
jonsaviours
Beautiful
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mfortney2538
I enjoyed reading this one
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AIDA
What a beautifully crafted poem! "A Flame of Love Aloft a Mountain Peak" radiates warmth and emotion from the very first line. The imagery of a flame and a mountain peak evokes powerful feelings of both remembrance and reverence. Your use of metaphors like "guardian angel" and “twinkle in her gentle eyes” adds depth and tenderness that truly resonates. It’s clear that the poem is a heartfelt tribute to someone whose spirit shines brightly.

The poem flows smoothly, allowing readers to visualize the elevated spirit you describe. The uplifting tone invites a sense of peace and comfort, reminding us of the enduring nature of love even after loss. Each stanza contributes to a cohesive theme of love transcending beyond life, which is both touching and profound.

Improvement Suggestions:

1. Varying Line Lengths:
While the poem has a lovely rhythm, experimenting with varying line lengths could enhance the emotional impact. Shorter lines can create a more poignant pause, while longer lines can convey more elaborate thoughts and imagery.

2. Sensory Details:
Consider adding sensory details to engage the reader’s other senses. Describing the sounds of the mountain, the feel of the breeze, or even the colors surrounding the flame could deepen the reader's connection to the imagery.

3. Expand on Emotions:
While the poem beautifully portrays love and remembrance, exploring a wider range of emotions could add complexity. Perhaps touching on moments of joy or nostalgia could make the experience even richer.

4. Alliteration and Rhythm:
Incorporating more alliteration or rhythmic elements could enhance the musicality of the poem. Experimenting with sound can make certain lines stand out even more and add to the overall flow.

Overall, this poem has all the makings of a heartfelt tribute, and with a few tweaks, it could shine even brighter. Thank you for sharing such a meaningful piece! more »
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