'Til She Sings



Now I know why the poets write
'cuz here I go!
..her face..her way..her light.

Not even close ..have I seen or felt before-
such an energy go right to my core.

She's right next door ..a mere few feet away-
but there's nothing I can do ..and nothing I can say.

Off limits ..our ages so wide apart-
who's played this trick on me from the start?

Now for me she so lovely sings -
from her heart written on Seed**
..fully smitten already -there was hardly a need.

She'll leave me soon -'cuz that's what always happens..
that mean 'ol trickster back happy to press my buttons.

But I'll have those sweet songs to remember her by..
and sing them right along with her -trying not to cry.

'Til then ..good feelings I'll endeavor to keep-
with silence and distance ..so hard to meet.

For this beautiful young woman ..I'll someday wonder-
was she real ..or a dream?
Hazy for a spell
...'til she sings -

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Written on March 22, 2023

Submitted by tempebill on September 01, 2024

Modified by tempebill on September 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXA BB CC DD EFF GG HH XX XXXE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 916
Words 195
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 4

William Hughes

Never wrote anything before! This lovely neighborgirl(ayoungwoman) - in just about an instant - became an overwhelm to me as "Til She Sings" -not so subtlety brings out. She graciously accepted it as she said she would "in the spirit it was sent.." and rightly called it "vivifying" to its author --then predictably moved away a few months later. "Dream From A Drop" offers the reader an update to [TSS] and is filled with a vivid hope of love!!.. as it addresses what only answered prayer can remedy("banish") completely. more…

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  • Bears1071
    wow. this one touched me. thank you.
    LikeReply1 day ago
    • tempebill
      how nice of you to say!..thank you and my best to you!!
      LikeReply1 day ago
  • Pruett1023
    I enjoyed reading your post. Keep up the good work.
    LikeReply13 days ago
    • tempebill
      thank you so much...!
      LikeReply13 days ago
  • Cubastic786
    Good
    LikeReply 117 days ago
    • tempebill
      I appreciate your good word...have a great day
      LikeReply13 days ago
  • amnew1969
    Thank you for sharing. Very good.
    LikeReply17 days ago
    • tempebill
      sorry this is late...thank you for your nice comment ..!
      LikeReply13 days ago

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