Blake’s Fire



Fire, fire, burning bright,
weaving shadows from the night,
how did mortal man learn to
unlock the secrets within you?

From what darker, distant past
did we emerge, free at last,
once we'd learned to tame then free
thy flaming volatility?

For the magic of your light
gave us ways to fend off night,
steal back daylight, and explore
lands unseen by man before.

Fire, with your powers near,
we outshone our darkest fears
so that, in caves, we could start
making works of timeless art.

What hand or eye or mind was first
moved to quench deeper, inner thirsts;
to–with pigment, coal, or chalk–
imbue their Self upon the rock?

So, with these powers over dark,
one last thought was left to spark,
as we, through art, learned to see
our true immortality.

About this poem

This is my take/tribute to Blakes - "The Tyger" after seeing a video by John Green on the Lascaux cave art and coming across a picture of cave art depicting lions (link below). https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Lions_painting,_Chauvet_Cave_(museum_replica).jpg

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Submitted by thoughtsFromB4 on August 31, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD AAEE XFGG XFHH IIDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 769
Words 157
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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9 Comments
  • anglin1521
    I can relate to this poem. It's what my goes on in my head on a daily basis
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • dawg4jesus
    I thought it was nice. I liked it too.
    LikeReply 110 days ago
  • Paige123
    Good work
    LikeReply 111 days ago
  • reidiny_a
    I really like your poem, the way you connected fire to everything even going back into the past it really says something.
    LikeReply 112 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    An alchemical poem of baptism by fire!
    LikeReply 114 days ago
  • Supermario86
    I feel it, I truly feel it
    LikeReply 115 days ago
  • Cubastic786
    Nice
    LikeReply 116 days ago
  • dawg4jesus
    I thought it was nice, but I'm not sure if I feel like I was enlightened. Just a little humor. Hope you don't mind.
    LikeReply 117 days ago
  • luisestable1
    This is simply marvelous, taking from that famous poem by Blake, "The Tyger." I think you did it justice. Your try is worthy of reading for how you came to create the lines to make us see where they got their making. Good job! 
    LikeReply 117 days ago

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