Rug Burns



In time we would appreciate
the lure of cotton sheets,
with king-size mattress firm enough
to muffle frantic beats.

At times tea candles lit the room
each one a sputtering wick,
their brief lives ended in two puffs,
our four-lipped foreplay trick.

Most times we’d tumble to the floor
our carnal thirst to slake,
the god of lust well pleased we knew
what trophies rug burns make.

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Written on June 04, 2023

Submitted by Noddy on July 27, 2024

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Scheme XAXA XBXB XBXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 383
Words 76
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

Roy Graham

 · 1946 · Glasgow

Retired teacher living in Calgary, Alberta, Canada. more…

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9 Comments
  • jessel.46123
    Great piece
    LikeReply22 days ago
  • delano
    Honestly, i was gettinh lost. Didnt get much of it
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • susan.brumel
    I enjoyed this very much. Nicely penned. Hope those rug burns healed up ;-)
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • Shocam
    Very great poem
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • Pruett1023
    Congratulations on being the 4th runner up. I enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work.
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • npirandy
    Very clever Roy, and quite amusing
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • abdull.15699
    It’s the story of our day to day life, compactly well explained.
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • wolf43man
    i read every poem regardless of the talley. this poem is original, not cliched,concise
    brings back good memories, in a clever way shows youthful and mature relationships, is wise, wry, sly, and true. great title. memorable. says a lot in a few words and images. can feel those rug burns right now. 
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • rich7
    evocative. Nice.
    LikeReply7 months ago

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