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Slow Down

Kimberley Hamilton

Slow down life is not a race,
Slow down and give God space,
Slow down and take things at His pace,
Just slow down.

Slow down embrace the morning sunrise,
Slow down and look into a child's eyes,
Slow down life is full of surprise,
Just slow down.

Slow down and listen to a robin sing,
Slow down see the chicks gather in their mother's wing,
Slow down acknowledge Christ as King,
Just Slow down.

Slow down and watch the stars at night,
Slow down as they twinkle oh so bright,
Slow down everything will turn out right,
If you just Slow down.

About this poem

The poems is about slowing down. We often race through life and don't take time to enjoy the little things around us. Like a robin singing, a flower blooming and even just listening to our very breath. The poem speaks of giving God space to work in our lives is we just slow down.

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Written on August 04, 2024

Submitted by Blossoming on August 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aaaB cccB dddB eeeb
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 542
Words 121
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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Kimberley Hamilton

New poet just starting out. Kim Hamilton is from Belfast in Northern Ireland. Loves nature and poems on faith. more…

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  • Blossoming
    Blossoming
    Very True. Speed kills in so many ways both physically and mentally.
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Thank you so much, Blossoming. I wish you a lengthy rich career in poetry, sharing your love of nature and all of God’s creatures with others.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Blossoming
      Blossoming
      thank you so much. Kim
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • dawg4jesus
    dawg4jesus
    Beautiful and true. I love to hear words of wisdom.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Blossoming
      Blossoming
      thank you. Very much appreciated. Kim
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Very nice. This poem should be posted in the waiting room of every doctor’s office. I thank you.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Blossoming
      Blossoming
      thank you. Yes we all need to slow down for both our physical and mental health.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • Kshetrapal
    Kshetrapal
    Slow down is emphatically patience , that it means.
    Milton ,'s lines ,They also serve who stand and wait.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Kshetrapal
    Kshetrapal
    If you just slow down ,
    A song that praises God , is eternal .
    I like the song. Symphony.
    Though not met , I wish you good health and happiness.
    Regards,
    Kshetrapal
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Blossoming
      Blossoming
      thanks. I haven't been here for awhile due to writing Ben's Sweet Act of Kindness the children's book. We all need to slow down at times and learn to live in the present moment. Not always easy though. Kim  
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    What a beautifully poignant poem! Your use of repetition with the phrase "slow down" creates a soothing rhythm that perfectly captures the essence of your message. The imagery you evoke—morning sunrises, children's eyes, and the twinkling stars—paints a vivid picture of the simple yet profound joys in life. It's a gentle reminder to appreciate the little moments and to take a breath amidst the chaos of everyday life.

    Your emphasis on spirituality, particularly with lines referencing God and Christ, adds depth and warmth to the poem, inviting readers to reflect not just on their pace but also on their connection to faith and the greater universe. The structure is clear and effective, allowing the reader to easily follow along and resonate with each sentiment.

    For improvement, consider exploring the unique feelings or stories behind each moment you describe. Perhaps you could delve a little deeper into what slowing down means to you personally. This added layer could invite readers to connect with your experiences and insights on an even more intimate level.

    Additionally, varying the sentence structure could enhance the poem's musicality. Mixing shorter lines with longer, more descriptive ones can create a dynamic flow that captivates the reader's attention even more.

    Overall, your poem is a heartfelt celebration of mindfulness and appreciation for life's moments. Keep it up! I can't wait to see how you continue to develop your poetic voice!     
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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