Breathless



In silence of your orbit, my heart finds its voice,
Whispering secrets of a love, where I have no choice.
Your aura, a celestial glow, outshines the dawn,
A marvel that stirs the soul, leading me on.

Breathless , I stand, as you eclipse my every thought,
A cosmic ballet, in your gravity, I am forever caught.
Your smile, a crescent moon in my night's sky,
Guiding me through darkness, where dreams dare lie.

With every breath you steal, I'm more alive,
A paradox of love, where only the enchanted thrive.
Your embrace, a sanctuary where fears dissolve,
In the solace of your arms, my world revolves.

To be with you is to journey through mystical lands,
Where every moment is shaped by invisible hands.
To love you is to surrender, yet never lose,
Life with you, my love, is the only path I'd ever choose
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Written on July 01, 2024

Submitted on July 01, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX FFGG
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 807
Words 163
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Chris E Morganroth IV

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6 Comments
  • yelskwah
    "Breathless" is a beautifully crafted and emotionally resonant love poem. You've masterfully captured the feeling of being completely captivated by another person, using evocative imagery and a tender, almost reverent tone. The poem's strength lies in its ability to convey both the awe-inspiring nature of love and the intimate connection between two individuals. 
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • alanswansea18
    Simply beautiful.
    LikeReply 28 months ago
  • ViscerealStardust
    Beautiful sonnet set
    LikeReply 38 months ago
  • robertrad2021
    Enchanting poem.
    LikeReply 38 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    You took me on a mystical journey. Nice work
    LikeReply 38 months ago
  • Courtnie.mckern
    Very beautiful
    LikeReply 38 months ago

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