Your hair of woven silk.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

Your hair of woven silk.

You are standing there with your silky black hair, which required the finest silkworm to weave. Your eyes were stolen from the stars way up high in the sky. Your ruby-red lips are soft and sweet, but I have to ask. I know you come with a fee. I love you, but are you worth the pain and sorrows? Maybe I should come back again and ask tomorrow. When you speak, it's like a sweet melody that plays a tune as the flowers spring up in the month of June. Please tell me what I must do. I think I will leave it up to you. There's nothing else left that I can do. But I love you. 

About this poem

This poems about my dream girl but there's always pains and sorrows I have to ask what about tomorrow.

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Written on March 16, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 16, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 16, 2024

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  • Kaytee
    I love this one! Great job! Paints a great picture.
    LikeReply4 months ago
    • alanswansea18
      well thank you my dear. I can't compete with you but it means a lot.
      LikeReply 14 months ago
    • Kaytee
      You’re welcome
      LikeReply4 months ago


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