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Take a look at me now

Aldo Gabbay 1964 (sap paulo)

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Take a look at me now
I been a fool before
Thinking that I didn't need
Anybody in my life
And I also was very lonely
Living alone
It took me a long time
To decide to
Accept my father in my heart
I am very happy that
I accept my father in my life
Today I  am a Christian
And I am also
Praying for  my father
Every single morning
When I get out of the
Yes Father I have a hard time
Getting up in the morning
And I am also always getting
Tired in the morning
Father I am not a morning person

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Written on June 09, 2023

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Words 107
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
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